Kia ora Mihitaurangi My name is Molly and I am in Room 3 at St Mary’s School in Gisborne.
I enjoyed the part when you showed a picture of the characters. When you said they went into a haunted house I thought they would meet a vampire or something. Next time you could make your narrative longer Where was the pool?
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ReplyDeleteMy name is Molly and I am in Room 3 at St Mary’s School in Gisborne.
I enjoyed the part when you showed a picture of the characters.
When you said they went into a haunted house I thought they would meet a vampire or something.
Next time you could make your narrative longer
Where was the pool?
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